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Should I use "these" or "those" to refer to previously mentioned arguments? I can give some context:

Paragraph 2: Argument A

Paragraph 3: Argument B

Paragraph 4: Argument C

Paragraph 5: For th_se reasons I would like to apply to this scholarship, since.......

Eddie Kal
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Luiz Marcelo
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    Does this answer your question? [Difference between These & Those.](https://ell.stackexchange.com/questions/52477/difference-between-these-those) Also [“These” or “Those” in an essay?](https://ell.stackexchange.com/questions/166860/these-or-those-in-an-essay), [Confused about When to Use “these” and “those”](https://ell.stackexchange.com/questions/17873/confused-about-when-to-use-these-and-those), and many others. – FumbleFingers Jan 09 '20 at 15:56
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    Note that there's something a bit "awkward" about your example context, because both ***for these/those reasons*** and ***since*** actually mean ***because***, so you're essentially saying ***Because** [reason1], [statement], **because** [reason2]*. Which would usually be expressed as ***Because** [reason1] **and** [reason2], [statement]*. – FumbleFingers Jan 09 '20 at 16:09
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    Usually we apply *to* an institution, and *for* a position, an award, or a scholarship. – jonathanjo Jan 09 '20 at 17:40

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In your example, you probably should us "these", but both are acceptable.

  • For these reasons must be near to the reasons
  • For those reasons must be after the reasons.

Good:

  • "I'm poor. I'm sick. For these reasons, I'm not going to the party."
  • "I'm not going to the party for these reasons: I'm poor and I'm sick."
  • "Chapter 1 explained the history. Chapter 2 explained the current situation. Chapter 3 explained the consequences. For those reasons, we can't accept this policy change."
  • "Chapter 1 explained the history. Chapter 2 explained the current situation. Chapter 3 explained the consequences. For these reasons, we can't accept this policy change."

Bad:

  • "I'm not going to the party for those reasons: I'm poor and I'm sick."
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